Your initial post is due on Friday, and your response to a classmate is due Sunday.
Read the essential question, and write a thoughtful post. You must cite at least one passage from Lord of the Flies to support your thinking about the question. Your post must be at least 100 words. You must use the CLAIM, EVIDENCE, ELABORATION format that we used last week. Your response to a classmate must also be thoughtful. You must respond to at least one other classmate. Your response must be at least 50 words. No citation from the text is necessary for your response. 2. How do actions of characters reveal their personalities?
Andrew L. , Period 5
11/7/2012 02:05:28 pm
CLAIM: The personalities of a person are clearly exemplified through one’s actions that are demonstrated.
raymond morales
11/8/2012 06:03:41 am
there actions reveal their personalities because when they do something people notices if there nice or if they are rude and disrespectful
Ms. Sutton
11/10/2012 06:44:45 am
Raymond,
Eric Lo, Period 5
11/8/2012 01:56:03 pm
Claim:
Courtney Thong
11/11/2012 01:19:25 pm
I agree with it because it is true how people personality comes out, the way they act. Ralph shouldn't have made fun of Piggy in order to get into the group. Ralph was pals with Piggy before he joined the group and shouldn't abandoned him. What Ralph did to Piggy was so mixed up.
lika m. period 5
11/12/2012 01:41:08 am
I agree with your post, Eric. Personality of people are shown through actions and sometimes their attitudes. The passage shows Ralph's personality when he makes fun of Piggy. It shows that he is an arrogant, mean child who does not care about Piggy's feelings.
Aron I. Period 5
11/9/2012 10:33:26 am
Claim:
Jacelyn K., Per 6
11/11/2012 09:09:43 am
I agree with you. Personality is show through action and how it affects each person individually. Jack's cruel nature seems to be one of the most spottingly obvious personality that showed through action. It shows his viciousness and first to become savage.
Wei L. Period 5
11/11/2012 03:02:20 pm
Your claim is a great example of how people like Jack can be very unpleasant to other around him. He finds his own horrible way of solving his problems by making fun of someone else. Jack shows his personalities by being a shameful leader.
Dinh T, Period 5
11/9/2012 11:30:33 am
Claim:
Aron I. Period 5
11/11/2012 11:49:33 am
I think that you made a very good example of how a person’s actions reveal his or her personality. Your claim and elaboration made me think that Piggy is the most intelligent out of the group. Piggy’s intelligence, skills to guide, and moral thoughts make him what should be a good leader and person, which is shown through his actions.
Cally M., Period 5
11/11/2012 01:56:01 pm
I agree with your statement that actions do reveal the personalities of people because their intelligence and way of thinking is shown through their choices. Piggy did prove himself to be an intelligent person by voicing his reasonable ideas as well as his opinions on the actions of the other boys.
An H., Period 5
11/11/2012 02:12:58 pm
While Piggy is showing intelligence, it also shows something else in his personality. It shows that he is kind to other people because he is caring for them by guiding them on what they should be doing. It also shows that he is kind because he was chastising them on what they did wrong.
Alvin O. per. 5
11/9/2012 02:45:42 pm
CLAIM
James Zhijie R., Period 5
11/12/2012 08:18:47 pm
I think this is a very good evidence you gave to support this. Based on the novel, it says Maurice, who followed Roger's actions, still felt an sense of wrongdoing without parent supervision. This fact doesn't make Maurice's personality any different from Roger's because he did the same as what Roger did to the sandcastles. If Maurice really cared, he would've avoid stepping on the castle and would've warned Roger to do the right thing.
Dawson W., Period 5
11/14/2012 05:32:19 am
I agree with you alvin. In life many people have different personalities and the one way they show it is by showing who they are. The way they act and the things that they do. It shows to people what kind of person you are and how they want to think of you.
Benjamin Lee., Period 5
11/15/2012 11:59:37 am
I agree on a good elaboration and good evidence. They must show good things and do what is best for each other. So then they will be able to work together.
An H., Period 5
11/9/2012 02:59:33 pm
Claim: Actions reveal a lot about their personalities because their action shows what they are truly thinking.
Justin Tang
11/11/2012 07:11:40 am
I agree with your claim because when people want to show their anger, they do it with their actions. When Jack was mad he tried taking out his anger by pushing Piggy around. He felt good when they were making fun of him and that shows that hes just a jerk. It was his fault but he still found a way to avoid the blame.
Dinh T, Period 5
11/11/2012 01:12:10 pm
I like your quote because it shows that Jack has a bad temper person because he took his anger out by hitting Piggy and insulting him. I also agree that he does not like being told that what he did was wrong because he would not have hit Piggy if he didn't say anything.
Robert Carrasco
11/12/2012 03:01:11 pm
I agree with your quote because, when people show their anger they show it in their own way. Example Jack he showed his anger with violence and punching piggy in the stomach. This shows Jack's true personality. Good example by the way
Cally M, Period 5
11/9/2012 03:52:27 pm
Ms. Sutton
11/10/2012 06:42:56 am
Great paragraph, Cally. Don't forget the parenthetical page citation.
Eric Lo, Period 5
11/11/2012 10:52:36 am
I agree with you claim because most people don't know the different between helping and hurting someone. Ralph's didn't know that he was hurting Piggy but at least Ralph could have apologized sincerely. Ralph makes it seem like he was doing his part for standing up for piggy but piggy didn't need anyone to stand up for him. Ralph might think he was being a good Samaritan but he actually hurt Piggy more than the other kids did.
Alvin O. per. 5
11/11/2012 10:52:42 am
I really agree with this post of yours Cally, because it also relates to the what I was trying to point out in my post. You're showing that although an individual's action may reveal an aspect of their personality, it doesn't reveal their entire personality by saying that Ralph showed both a cynical and considerate side.
Andrew L. , Period 5
11/11/2012 01:19:13 pm
The claim provided seems very logical in terms of Ralph's negligence towards Piggy. Ralph's inconsiderate words, have led to the unjust relationship between the two of them. Ralph proves his negligence through his actions by being a haughty leader. He has no understanding to how Piggy feels or how he feels about being mortified by everyone else. Piggy takes the insult obsequiously and Ralph sees it as a joke.
Alex D. Period 5
11/12/2012 09:29:53 am
I agree with you that actions resemble a person's personality. How people respond and react to problems and situations show whether they are smart, bold, brave, and compassionate. It shows what kind of person that really is. I also agree that Piggy is smart and has a very nice personality on the way he deals with thingsin the book.
Aren Lim Period 5
11/12/2012 01:01:49 pm
Your example from the story truly was a great reflection on the theme of the weekly LORD OF THE FLIES post. Where you displayed Jack's true side of the story. It showed that he was not afraid of being over-ruling, and hold a monarchy over everyone.
Aren Lim
11/11/2012 01:41:27 am
claim:
Ms. Sutton
11/11/2012 09:22:01 am
Hi, Aren,
Aren Lim Period 5
11/12/2012 12:40:59 pm
Thanks for the advice Ms. Sutton. Also i would like to appologize for not including my period number. I appreciate you taking the time to deal with my mistake.
Brandon Yip Period 5
11/11/2012 12:54:05 pm
I liked the way you showed what the characters are defined for. Jack gets annoyed by Piggy when he is trying to help out or making out benefits for the entire group. Jack is like the bossy one of the entire group or the bully. He always pushes people around no matter how young or older they are. And Ralph, he is the group leader but he sometimes did a terrible job on it.
Justin Tang
11/11/2012 05:54:24 am
Claim: Personalities of characters are revealed by their actions because they are what other people perceive them as.
Cergio A. Period 5
11/12/2012 11:26:58 am
I agree with your post because people can dress strange or look very mean but when you get to know them they might be soft hearted and care for others. Or people who seem to dress like everybody else walking around may be selfish or mean, but u may think because of the way they look they'll be nice but once u get to know them they end up being mean.
Jeffery W. Period 5
11/15/2012 08:57:39 am
I agree with your post, Justin, because if people show what they do, then it makes you think what kind of person they are. Ralph wanted the priorities that they made to be done in order to ensure that everyone is safe on the island. Jack wanted his own priorities of being a hunter and getting meat for the people on the island.
Jacelyn K., Per. 6
11/11/2012 09:06:48 am
Claim: Personality of each character is clearly shown through their action by their morals, thoughts, and reactions to a certain event.
Ms. Sutton
11/11/2012 09:20:22 am
Jacelyn,
Courtney Thong Per 5
11/11/2012 01:11:03 pm
Claim:Actions are revealed a lot by their personalities because if someone told you something important, you would keep it to yourself.
Brandon Yip Period 5
11/11/2012 01:24:27 pm
Claim:
Wei L. Period 5
11/11/2012 02:51:06 pm
Claim:
Jeanette F., period 5
11/12/2012 09:41:01 am
I see what you mean. Jack is showing his savagness(if that's a word). He is the only thing that is holding the boys back from staying civilized. I, personaly, think that Jack is to blame for the shelters not being finished.
Lika M. Period 5
11/12/2012 02:02:21 am
Claim: Personality of a character is shown through their actions and how they react to other characters.
Tara D., Period 5
11/13/2012 10:12:20 am
Jack does show how he has a bad personality by always picking on and bullying Piggy for no apparent reason. Piggy on the other hand just tries his best to keep the boys civilized. I agree with you and how you think Jack is the antagonist in the story while Piggy is the protagonist.
Alex D. Period 5
11/12/2012 09:27:25 am
Jeanette F., period 5
11/12/2012 09:38:24 am
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James Zhijie R,. Period 5
11/12/2012 08:03:41 pm
Claim: Actions of characters reveal their personalities by the quality of work performed by that particular person.
Tara D., Period 5
11/13/2012 10:09:24 am
Claim: Actions of characters show how the person is. Their action reveals how their personalities are. If you do bad actions for no reason, that shows that you have a bad personality. If you have a good personality then you do good deeds and actions.
Dawson W., Period 5
11/14/2012 05:30:21 am
Calim: Everyone’s personalties is different from each other and they can express themselves the way that they want. When people say or do something it shows the person’s personalities.
Jeffery W. Period 5
11/15/2012 08:28:02 am
Claim: Actions reveal a lot about a person’s personalities because their actions show what they would do and how they would act.
Robert Carrasco
11/15/2012 09:08:39 am
Claim: Everybody has there own personality and not everybody perfect. Ralph the leader shows that he can be a leader. He shows that he will do whatever it takes to get his team to survive on the island.
Benjamin L., Period 5
11/15/2012 11:57:08 am
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